Natalie Murray is an Australian author to watch. If you’re a fan of historical romance, you might already know her Emmie and the Tudor King series, which follows a young woman’s time slip into Tudor England and entanglement with a (fictional) fiery ruler. It’s swoon-worthy, passionate, transportive reading.
Now, Natalie has returned to the present day with a contemporary romance novel set in Newcastle, NSW – where she now lives and where I grew up! – and I was so delighted to work with her on a structural edit for this manuscript late last year. Her best-friends-to-lovers story is heart-wrenching, funny and adorable in equal parts and I can’t wait till everyone else gets to read it too. In exciting news, that won’t be too long! Natalie’s contemporary romance has just been acquired by Allen & Unwin and is due to hit shelves in early 2024.
Here, Natalie takes us through her journey from TV news reporter to author, the joys of writing both historical and contemporary fiction, her top advice for aspiring authors, and why the romance genre will always be her true love.
Tell me about your journey to becoming an author. You have a background in journalism – what inspired you to make the leap to writing fiction?
I’ve always been a writer in some form, but until recently, it was only ever non-fiction. While I spent years writing news articles, business materials and blogs, I’d convinced myself I’d never attempt to write fiction, despite being a voracious reader. But when I was pregnant with my first child and at home feeling unwell, I began experimenting with writing short romance stories and immediately became hooked. When I published the stories online and received wonderful feedback from readers, I decided to try writing a full-length novel. I was watching the TV series The Tudors at the time, and having dreams about the Tudor period, so I decided to turn one of those dreams into a novel, which led to the first book in my Emmie and the Tudor King trilogy!
Has your experience in writing for media helped you in writing books? Or is it an entirely different beast?
I primarily worked as TV journalist, which requires you to ‘write to the pictures’ with as few words as possible – a very different process to describing a world for readers to imagine across tens of thousands of words. While plotting novels and character arcs bears little resemblance to anything I’ve worked on for the media, working as a journalist did teach me vital skills about the mechanics of writing and sentence structure and the importance of telling a good story and telling it quickly. So, there is probably more crossover than I think! Witnessing the idiosyncrasies of people and society as a reporter has also probably enriched my novels and characters in ways I don’t even realise.
What do you love about writing love stories?
Oh gosh, what don’t I love! I’m an incurable romantic and never tire of perfecting a line of swoon-worthy dialogue or writing about the accidental brush of knuckles or the zing of a moment of direct eye contact. Every time I write a romance novel, I get to fall in love all over again, which is a high I’ll never stop chasing. While I’ve written fast-paced stories before with plenty of action, there’s something about the stillness of romance that I also love… of letting two characters shift into each other’s spaces and come to the realisation that each one is having a profound and life-changing impact on the other. It’s also great fun to write pages of romantic tension and then finally reach that explosive kiss or that confession that makes the reader’s heart beat harder. It’s also a genre that guarantees a happy and hopeful ending, so it feels like a safe space in which to escape.
“Every time I write a romance novel, I get to fall in love all over again, which is a high I’ll never stop chasing.”
Your first books are historical novels – what sparked your interest in Tudor England?
I’ve been captivated by the Tudor period for as long as I can remember, which is one of the most dramatic periods in British history. All you need to do is look at the Tudor family tree to see that this family was a hot mess of treason, love and betrayal. That said, I didn’t want to write another book about its established events or about Henry VIII’s wives or daughters. So, I decided to create a reimagined history in which Queen Elizabeth I married her rumoured lover Robert Dudley, Earl of Leicester, and they had a son, Nicholas Tudor. My muse for this fictional king was probably the real Henry VIII in his younger years, who was not only ridiculously smart and talented but – according to reports – a total hottie. He was more than six feet tall, athletic, and known to be extremely handsome. My King Nick is part young Henry: charismatic, clever, and fiery to the end. It’s a fun story to lose yourself in!
What funny or surprising details did you unearth while researching the period?
There were plenty of surprising and funny tidbits, but I remember being quite amused to discover that water was considered unhealthy in Tudor times, so most people drank ale all day to stay hydrated – or wine if you were rich. One would assume the Tudors were permanently tipsy! That said, drunkenness was not tolerated, and there were punishments for alcohol abuse. If you were drunk in public and making a nuisance of yourself, you could be forced to wear a beer barrel as a form of humiliation, which was known as a ‘drunkard’s cloak’. You would be made to parade around inside a huge, heavy barrel with holes cut out for your head, legs and arms.
Your next book is a contemporary romance, which I was thrilled to work on recently. What was it like moving into the contemporary genre? Do you think you’ll stay in the here and now or will historical romance come calling again?
Some of the Emmie and the Tudor King series is set in the present day, so I’d already played in the contemporary landscape and thoroughly enjoyed it. I never actually intended to become a historical romance author: I wanted to write a novel set in Tudor England that had the feel of a contemporary romance (a bit like a novel version of the TV series Reign). I always planned to move into the contemporary space once I’d finished the Tudor series and believed it would be easier because there is much less research involved. However, I was wrong! The Tudor setting provided so much immediate ‘story’ to work with… joustings, feastings, dances, the royal court – even beheadings. Writing contemporary romance means I’ve had to come up with 90,000 words of story and complications without that initial material to bounce off. I’m still not sure which is easier!
Give us a teaser – how would you describe your upcoming contemporary romance book?
I’m so excited about my next novel, which is a best-friends-to-lovers contemporary romance set in Australia! It’s a swoony and angsty story about love and friendship, loss, and finding the courage to follow your heart, even if it means facing your biggest fears. While offering plenty of sizzling romantic chemistry and light moments, the book explores the impacts of trauma and health anxiety in the era of ‘Doctor Google’ – something I have personally battled. Best-friends-to-lovers is my absolute favourite romance trope, so I have always wanted to “give it a crack”, as we Aussies like to say. In this one, you can expect slow-burn tension, forced proximity, ice-cream kisses, cute texting, and swoony confessions. After writing three books set in Tudor England, it’s been a joy to write a story set in my own backyard. And I just adore the male lead in this book, Ryan James. He is such a sweetheart.
I know you have a really detailed process when it comes to writing a novel. How essential is working with an editor to your process?
I can’t imagine completing a book without an editor. Every time I’ve revised a novel after receiving feedback from an editor, I’m blown away at the improvement, and I always end up turning around and blurting to my husband: “It’s absolutely amazing what editors can do!” No matter how much careful thought I put into each book, how much plotting, or frantic revisions, I can only take it so far without the expert eyes of an editor to lift it to the next level. After working on multiple drafts of a full-length novel, it’s also easy to lose sight of both the bigger picture and the very small things that an editor will spot immediately.
“Editors have given me so many invaluable insights, like how to get more out of a theme, how to optimise the structure to ensure the climax hits at the right time and with the right degree of gut punch, when to boost the tension and when to pull it back, and the importance of character consistency.”
Can you share any insight into lessons you’ve learned from the editing experience?
I’ve become better at guessing what editors are going to pick me up on, so I tend to clean those up as I write in the hope that, one day, an editor will say to me: “It’s perfect! You don’t need to change a thing!” (In my dreams, haha.) Editors have given me so many invaluable insights, like how to get more out of a theme, how to optimise the structure to ensure the climax hits at the right time and with the right degree of gut punch, when to boost the tension and when to pull it back, and the importance of character consistency (which can be a tricky thing to get right). Sometimes I tend to overwrite and be a little heavy-handed, and you, Penny, have been particularly wonderful at shaving off superfluous language. Overall, I’ve learned from working with an editor that no matter how polished a novel is, it can always be better.
What writing or editing rules do you love to break?
I love to push limits in romance. The overwhelming majority of readers who loved the Emmie and the Tudor King series said they adored the lead male character, Nick Tudor, but a few readers have complained about his fiery, egotistical nature. But I was creating the character of a sixteenth-century Tudor king, and I wanted him to be authentic. So, I set out never to compromise on his personality or soften him to make him more palatable to a twenty-first-century audience. I also probably use too many adverbs and adjectives and insert a touch too much emotion into my writing at times, but that’s because these are things I love as a reader. My favourite author is Paullina Simons because she doesn’t hold back on angst and emotion. I love and need the ‘happily ever after’ in romance, but before I get there, I want to be kicked in the heart. Probably because it makes the make-up kiss that much sweeter!
“I love and need the ‘happily ever after’ in romance, but before I get there, I want to be kicked in the heart. Probably because it makes the make-up kiss that much sweeter!”
What advice can you offer other aspiring authors?
Still on editing, I think it’s important for aspiring authors to remember that editors are on your team. The first few editor comments you receive can feel like criticism, but it’s not in a disapproving way; it’s because they’re fighting for you to create the best story you can. On writing overall, my main advice to authors is to finish the damn book. When you start writing your first novel, it is far too easy to give up. It’s a tough, gruelling process that can take years, and when no one is paying you a cent, no one is reading a word of it, and the couch is whispering your name, the urge to just walk away can be overwhelming. But the only way a book is written is that it’s written… one word, one sentence, one day at a time. There’s no shortcut. But if you just keep going, you will reach the end, and then you’ll have a full draft to go back and begin editing, which is when the magic happens and the fun begins. So, don’t be discouraged if your first draft isn’t as polished as you’d imagined. My first drafts are almost unreadable. But just finish the damn book, and then you can go back and fix it, which is a deeply enjoyable part of the process and easier than writing that first draft.
That’s excellent advice and I couldn’t agree more! Finally, what’s next for you? What are you working on now?
I’ve just finished plotting my next Australian contemporary romance, which features the tropes of grumpy-meets-sunshine and fake dating (with a twist). I can’t wait to start writing it! And I’m hugely excited to have nearly finished my first contemporary romance co-written with US author Jenny Hickman, which is called Hating the Best Man, which will be out in spring 2023. Jenny and I have fantastic writing chemistry and the same taste in all things romance, and I can’t wait for us to work on more books together. This is only the beginning.
For more about Natalie’s books, follow her on Instagram @nataliemurrayauthor or visit her website.
Thank you. Penny, your questions were exactly what I would have liked to ask an accomplished author and Natalie, your answers were most informative and inspiring . I have started my memoir some time ago and now feel truly motivated to get back to it.
That’s wonderful to hear, Eva. Thank you for reading!