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    Diane Hester is reshaping the past with fiction

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    The Fortress of Us cover showing the interior of an old timber barn

    An unsettling childhood experience inspired the South Australian author’s latest suspense novel, which explores found family, neurodivergence and the lasting impact of trauma.

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    How to make your dialogue shine

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    Give your fictional conversations a glow-up with these tips.

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    Trust issues: Why trusting your reader is vital for strong storytelling

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    Two women sit on a couch with a pile of books and papers between them.

    A lack of trust can erode your story in subtle ways. Here’s how it tends to show up and how to show your reader you trust them to keep up.

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    Tips for using expletives in fiction

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    Do you use expletives in your writing? Here are a few pointers to keep in mind next time you’re dropping those swear bombs.

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    When is the best time to work with beta readers?

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    Here are my top three tips for authors preparing to send their stories out to beta readers.

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    Everything you need to know about semicolons

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    If you’re confused about how to use semicolons correctly, I’ve got the advice you need (and it’s not nearly as tricky as you might expect).

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I'm Penny, a writer and editor. On this blog I share writing tips, editing advice and interviews with authors to get you inspired. Read more

 
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  • How to make your dialogue shine
  • Trust issues: Why trusting your reader is vital for strong storytelling
  • Tips for using expletives in fiction
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New release alert! 🎉 My wonderful client @hester_d New release alert! 🎉 My wonderful client @hester_diane’s latest thriller The Fortress of Us is now available on Amazon and Kobo. To celebrate, I chatted with Diane about the incredible true story that inspired The Fortress of Us, the power of fiction to help us understand ourselves and others better, and how her background as a professional violinist informs her writing process. It’s a great read — grab a cuppa and follow the link in my bio, and while you’re at it, check out The Fortress of Us, a propulsive suspense story about four shattered souls who unite to save a child 🏡 #thriller #writingadvice
If you’re a writer you’re probably pretty okay wit If you’re a writer you’re probably pretty okay with listening to the voices in your head. But if you’re not sure how to deepen your story or figure out your character’s motivations I’m going to suggest taking it a step further and having a conversation with your cast. You’ll play both interviewer and interviewee, writing your character’s responses in their voice, and yes it’s a bit weird. But if you’re open to it, I think it’s a great way to unlock deeper themes and layers in your story and characters. Keen? Head to my website for a freebie designed to help you get a bit woo-woo with your work ✨ And if you’ve tried it, let me know below! Did it work for you?
Given the recent spate of disappointing headlines Given the recent spate of disappointing headlines about AI-written books and plagiarised reviews and A-list actors with massive book clubs encouraging women to ‘learn AI’ 😑, it seems timely/necessary to let you know that I’m not using generative AI in my business.  Rest assured, authors, I won’t compromise your copyright or confidentiality while working on your manuscript. I’m all about human creativity!  For the full rundown, head to my website to read my AI and Digital Tools Policy.

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